personal statement 點 寫 【懶人包】

非聯招的報名從九月開始,一直持續到每年的一月;

但是,所有必需的文書工作要到 11 月左右便要完成。

您不僅需要提交最基本的身份證明形式,還需要提交 DSE 證書、大學成績單和任何其他相關證明文件,以及個人陳述(personal statenent)。

將其發送到您申請的大學的招生部門。

有人指出,個人陳述不是很重要,大學主要看成績。 也有人指出Personal Statement寫得不好會影響面試機會,也有人指出Personal Statement不是很重要。

讓 Learnsmart今天幫助大家了個人陳述的重要性以及教你 personal statement 點 寫 。

Personal Statement是什麼?

Personal Statement 中文 照翻譯,就是個人陳述。

在申請學院和大學時,學生必須寫並提交一份叫做“個人陳述”的東西。 有點類似於找工作的Cover Letter,但今天介紹的Non-JUPAS Personal Statement主要是針對目前正在學習Asso/HD的學生申請大學的同學,而peronsal statement 就是Non Jupas要求作為文件之一提交。

Personal Statement幾時交?

報Non-JUPAS交application 的時候連同其他文件(例如:Reference Letter)一併交給該院校的學科。不同院校又不同的截止日期和遞交方法,例如HKU/CU報讀同一院校的不同科目都只是交一份Personal Statement,詳情大家可以到各大院校網頁參考。

Personal Statement 4大重點內容

個人陳述的目的是說服大學為什麼他們應該接受你,你必須解釋為什麼你覺得有必要學習這個主題。

為了證明你是最好的候選人,你可以從多種角度入手,比如有適合這個話題的個人性格,有個人的專長或能力,有一個理想的未來職業等等。

儘管個人陳述沒有規定的字數,但最大長度大概是 600 字。它不應該被過度繪製。

大約 400 字的長度是理想的。您無疑知道,負責非Jupas或國際大學的專業人員需要閱讀大量的個人陳述;

因此,引人入勝的介紹是絕對必要的。沒有預定的結構。

要考慮的最重要的事情是您申請的是哪個部門。

如果你申請中文系,你可以先講一個故事來證明你的迂迴寫作能力。

另一方面,如果你申請的是工程部門,你可以從自我介紹開始。

讀完第一段,你就已經知道你的性格是否適合在與此相關的部門學習。

personal statement開頭

首先,引言可能具有挑戰性;

然而,引言是整個個人陳述中最重要的部分!

如果你無法激起系裡教授的興趣,讓他們繼續閱讀,那麼這不會被認為是一份成功的個人陳述。

每個正在申請的人,請記住,您說的第一件事應該突出您的經驗和成就。

學術/非學術成就

如果你是一個在業餘時間積極參與各種活動的人,

在個人陳述中可以寫下你的學術或非學術成就 (當然最好的是與學科有關),

如獎項、活動經歷和活動項目,也會更有效。

如果您是一個在業餘時間積極參與不同活動的人,則能夠展現你這個優勢。

個性/生涯目標

和工作一樣,如果你想說服系裡的教授接受自己是他們中的一員,

你需要清楚地讓對方了解你的性格,以及你在職業生涯中想要完成的事情。

您可以選擇將您的計劃划分為短期和長期目標,並為每個目標提供詳盡的理由。

選擇參加這樣的計劃給人的印像是您的機構具有前瞻性和雄心。

對於學系/科目的認識,以及相關技能

最後,個人陳述還應簡要說明您對課程材料或部門的理解程度。

學生可以選擇搶先完成他們的作業,以便更好地了解該系提供的課程的獨特之處以及它與其他學院提供的其他類似課程的對比。

如果您有與您申請的部門相關的經驗或技能,您也可以在您的個人陳述中包含此信息。

例如,如果您申請土木工程,而你已經掌握autocad、revit等工具,都不妨可以寫出來(當然要真實),以證明自己的實力

Personal Statement 不應該寫的內容

即使是位於海外的非Jupas大學或大學也可能沒有某些科目的面試或在線面試。

正因為如此,除了看你的成績,你的個人陳述可能是教授了解你的唯一途徑;

但是,您應該避免重複您已經提交的一些信息。

不要提及你正在學習什麼,你的 DSE 成績、GPA 或IELTS成績,因為這些教授知道個人陳述的目的是讓教授了解你。

因此,教授已經熟悉的東西沒有必要浪費語言來解釋。

另一方面,它將深入解釋您目前正在從事的特定課程或特定項目如何激發您申請該部門的興趣。

例如,進行心理調查項目將向您介紹人類狀況的複雜性並激發您對心理學領域的興趣,同時讓您展示您對該領域研究的熟悉程度。

Personal Statement 文法

毫無疑問,保持寫作的簡潔和清晰是一個重要的優先事項;

然而,使用正確的英語語法更為關鍵。

要想博得教授的好感,就應該盡量讓他明白。

此外,句子不應過於冗長,也不應選擇僅偶爾使用的單詞。

花一些時間校對文章的語法幾次,以確保它不包含過多的簡單語法錯誤。

小編建議使用Grammarly等工具幫忙檢查。Grammarly的免費版本已經可以進行基本文法檢查!

personal statement 範本

這是一位申請酒店業同學的personal statement 例子,大家可以參考!

The hospitality industry is one of the fastest-growing industries, with a wide range of jobs to choose from. Until I started working as a tourist management assistant two years ago, I had never considered the interest and opportunities that this business offers.

It was a summer job that was supposed to help me fill my leisure time while also increasing my income. I expected to enjoy it because I enjoy meeting new people and visiting tourist attractions, but I had no idea how much it would affect me.

As an assistant, I was responsible for assisting the tourism manager in accommodating guests and organizing various forms of entertainment. This employment provided me with the opportunity to learn about the work of hotel, club, and event managers.

I was blown away by their commitment to meeting all of their clients’ needs. I’ve grasped the importance of their career, but I’ve also noticed how happy they are when their customers are happy. I’ll never forget the look on the tourist manager’s face when the guests congratulated him on a wonderful vacation. His grin was contagious.

Even though I was merely an assistant, I was pleased to see that the tourists were pleased with our efforts. This sense of fulfillment, even euphoria, was the driving force behind my decision to pursue a degree in hospitality management. I’m interested in learning more about each sector of the hospitality industry, as this is where I see my future.

Every manager needs to be a good leader. I believe I have acquired them through participation in a variety of activities. I was one of the kids picked to perform in a play commemorating my primary school’s 100th anniversary.

The most difficult aspect of the play’s planning was getting the kids to put on an inspiring performance. Eventually, I was able to persuade them not just to be good actors, but also to enjoy the process of acting. It got a lot of great feedback.

My enthusiasm for different languages ensured my effective participation in my school’s English Language Festival. As a result, my organizational and presentation skills have improved. I have developed a sense of team spirit as a member of both Eco-club-Mathew and Interact club, both of which have a charitable goal.

Hiking and picnics are two of my favorite things to do as a nature lover. I think England’s natural beauty is incredibly appealing, and I am looking forward to visiting and witnessing it for myself. Dancing is also an interest of mine. For the past five years, I’ve been performing in modern ballet. This is how I unwind and stay in shape.

I am a dependable and upbeat individual that thrives on difficulties and never gives up. I fantasize about running a hotel, or possibly a network of hotels. I realize how big my goals are and how hard I’ll have to work to reach them, but I believe the most essential thing is to have a desire and the determination to attain them.

When someone has strong wishes, he can fulfill them if he is self-assured, self-motivated, patient, and resolute. I understand that, in addition to these qualities, I need to have abilities to thrive in this competitive industry. I will gain the required skills and knowledge to be a successful hospitality manager by studying hospitality management.

I envision myself owning a five-star hotel on the French Riviera in ten years, and the first step toward that aim is to enroll in this course at your university.

總結

總的來說,個人陳述是一篇向機構解釋“你為什麼接受我?”的文章。

這也是您向所選部門提出才能的絕佳機會。

如果您想註冊自己喜歡的大學和課程,個人陳述非常重要。 您必須提交它並確保它寫得很好。

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