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【DSE英文】Paper 2 Writing 點先可以穩5追星?(實戰篇5)

【DSE英文】Paper 2 Writing 點先可以穩5追星?(實戰篇5)
學博小編
學博小編23 May 2026

不知大家知不知道英文科最容易在短時間內進步的分卷是那一份呢?答案就是Paper 2!只要在考試前做足準備功夫,Paper 2想拿A並非不可能。為了讓各位未來的DSE考生能夠有充足的星星素材準備Paper 2考試,學博教育會與大家分享和拆解各種文體的範文。今天讓小編跟同學們分享DSE 2024的 Part A題目吧!

2024DSE Paper 2 Writing Part A

After seeing the advertisement below, you booked a one-night stay at the Seaside Hotel. However, you were not happy with your stay because the room was very different from what was shown on the hotel's website.


Write an email to the hotel manager. In your email, you should explain:

  • why you were disappointed; and

  • what you would like the manager to do.

2024DSE PAPER 2 PART(A)2024DSE PAPER 2 PART(A)


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2024DSE Paper 2 Writing Part A 範文


範文:

信件主旨(提示:要簡潔明確,不要太花巧)

Subject: Disappointing Experience During Recent Stay

 

上款和引言:問好 + 寫信目的 + 簡述問題

Dear Sir/Madam,


I hope this message finds you well(問好). I am writing to express my dissatisfaction following my recent stay at the Seaside Hotel(寫信目的). I had high expectations based on your enticing advertisement, which showcased luxurious rooms with balconies and stunning ocean views. Unfortunately, my experience was far from what was promised, and I believe it's essential to bring these concerns to your attention(簡述問題).

 

正文:簡而精的主題句以述不滿 + 解釋 + 例子 + 總結句


投訴一:圖片與現實不符

First and foremost, the room I received was significantly different from what was displayed on your website(主題句). While the advertisement depicted a spacious room with modern furnishings and a picturesque view, the actual room was cramped and lacked the promised amenities. The balcony was not only smaller than advertised but also overlooked a neighbouring building rather than offering an inviting ocean vista(解釋和例子). This stark contrast left me feeling deceived and disappointed, as I had chosen your hotel specifically for the beautiful views advertised(總結句).

 

投訴二:網路不穩定

Additionally, I encountered issues with the Wi-Fi service, which was inconsistent and often unreliable(主題句). As someone who planned to work during my stay, this was particularly frustrating. The advertisement stated that Wi-Fi was included, yet I struggled to maintain a connection throughout most of my visit(解釋和例子). This unforeseen inconvenience disrupted my plans and added to my dissatisfaction with the overall experience(總結句).

 

投訴三:客房服務質素低劣

Lastly, the level of room service provided did not meet my expectations(主題句). The menu options were limited compared to what was advertised, and my order took an unusually long time to arrive. Upon receiving my meal, it was far from the quality I anticipated based on your promotional materials, which promised exceptional service and delightful dining experiences(解釋和例子). This failure in service made my stay feel less enjoyable and left me questioning whether I would consider returning in the future(總結句).

 

總結:重申不滿 + 提出合理要求

In light of these issues, I would appreciate a prompt response from you regarding how the hotel plans to address my complaints(重申不滿). I believe that a partial refund for the room rate would be an appropriate gesture, given the significant discrepancies between what was advertised and the experience I received. Furthermore, I urge you to consider updating your website to reflect the true nature of your accommodations accurately. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to this matter(要求).

 
下款

Best regards,
Chris Wong



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